tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5301656293323695739.post1049772873544565819..comments2023-11-02T12:03:22.614-04:00Comments on DEJ on Edge: subway catsDaniel Ezra Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01551801477498356203noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5301656293323695739.post-77253260987121375142010-04-25T00:09:35.366-04:002010-04-25T00:09:35.366-04:00modder n unders
at ready en swat
g'dam dem mee...modder n unders<br />at ready en swat<br />g'dam dem meece<br />gone gonna git caughtAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06425194909601211098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5301656293323695739.post-5503175624268203082010-04-23T22:35:52.688-04:002010-04-23T22:35:52.688-04:00I like this. I find rhyme so difficult. I especi...I like this. I find rhyme so difficult. I especially like the rhyme of "felines" and "G lines."Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08217190585433040551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5301656293323695739.post-73524289094405688662010-04-21T01:30:21.534-04:002010-04-21T01:30:21.534-04:00This may be my favorite so far. A great combo of h...This may be my favorite so far. A great combo of humor and truth without resorting to melodrama. And the meter is right on. And cats are awesome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14107108098543364765noreply@blogger.com